have you ever used personification in your stories
Thursday, May 23, 2019
Tuesday, May 14, 2019
Frozen adventure
My class made restricted story, with two to three similes and metaphor.
Leaving the base, I only see snow and the sun for miles.I wonder to myself, and think how could people
go out and find anything. I only got a few things to do told by advisers to go to a mountain and the ocean.
The snow is like massive mirror.I go to the snowmobile and start the adventure.
go out and find anything. I only got a few things to do told by advisers to go to a mountain and the ocean.
The snow is like massive mirror.I go to the snowmobile and start the adventure.
I thought about where I will go first. I finally decided to go to the edge of the ice sheet . To my surprise I
saw lots of things. There are waterfalls like hydro slide and Sea lions in the ocean, and polar bears of to
a new home. The sea lions are like real lions. I was fortune it enough to see a sea lion attack fish then rip
it to shreds.
saw lots of things. There are waterfalls like hydro slide and Sea lions in the ocean, and polar bears of to
a new home. The sea lions are like real lions. I was fortune it enough to see a sea lion attack fish then rip
it to shreds.
I move on to the mountains. I thought the mountains were shards of glass.once I get to the top the sight
became all mine to take in.I look back at the edge of the ice, and I see a whale jump out of the ocean for
a breath of air.Birds were planes and the ground and ocean was the runway.
became all mine to take in.I look back at the edge of the ice, and I see a whale jump out of the ocean for
a breath of air.Birds were planes and the ground and ocean was the runway.
The mountain is Neptune.
I leave the arctic with so much stories to tell my adviser, and so much for me to tell my family.
This was a trip of a lifetime and I could not thank my adviser enough.I would definitely go back to this
desert of snow that I love.
desert of snow that I love.
Monday, May 6, 2019
dialog
“Where are we going to go” asked jay to Chris.
“I was thinking to Jupiter, so we can get more stupider” Chris said with a smirk on his face.
“Don’t be silly Chris, plus if we could we don’t have a spaceship, so no” giggling jay as he also typed in
the fight company website name into the computer.
the fight company website name into the computer.
“Look!, Italy for 800 dollars a person and for an extra 200 dollars we can upgrade to business” said Chris.
“Or we could go to pairs for a 1000 dollars”said jay.
“ but I want to go ITALY! We we” mooned Chris.
“Well I want to go to pairs” jay acting with more superiority.
“Rock, paper, scissor me then”said Chris realising that he’s terrible at rock,paper scissor
“All right”said jay with so much confidence.
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